without spoilers princess brigade a magical girl series where each of the main cast is based off a fairy tale princess. These are some first drafts this journal maybe updated with background and general concepts until me and fellow creator Octo-Sock begin the finalization stage. Some general rules/requests when interacting/commenting on these concepts.
We are currently not looking for any artistic help this may change in the future, but currently we are not looking for help with art.
Constructive criticism is appreciated HOWEVER, be aware these are only first drafts so don't be rude, can and will take away your right to speak if your rude.
No you may not use the blank characters as bases, they are not bases they are to help me with character's anatomy sense this series has a vastly different art style from my normal one.
tldr: xXInkyd00dlesXx is mad at me because I pointed out her lies and now her and her friends are dogpiling me because i defended myself.
There also being massive fucking hypocrites because if you know anything about inky then you know they hate it when you copy oc's. Accept when you don't like those people aparently.
So obviously a copy of vic:
This is a copy of a skin I did for kumiho cookie a couple years ago:
This is a parody of me and my persona:
Just look at my two most recent pictures of my persona. You'll see the resemblance.
And this is just butterfly Nana but black:
Inky can you get you and your friends to back the fuck off??? I know your fucking pissy i called you out for fucking LYING about me because your mad I told a story about you on Twitter. But this is fucking ridiculous even for you guys.
Give it a fucking rest you absolute fucking obessive weirdos.
EDIT BECAUSE FOR SOME REASON I HAVE TO
UPDATE: My friend Pices found this too. Like this is actually unhinged:
Dude I love it when people draw other artist getting beat up because they rightfully call out shitty behavior. My fav. I don't care if it's supposed to be comedic you drew harm to my persona, that's literally never funny. I'm like an actual fucking person, there's not excuse for that shit.
So I wanna start off by saying this isn't gonna be long I didn't read through Inky's hole response because why the fuck would I do that? It's 30 minutes long. The only reason doing I'm this is to really catalogue all my random thoughts I have about the parts that stood out to me enough to read. This isn't gonna be organized I or anything.
For those that are siding with her for some god foresaken reason I pity you. Having so much hate in your heart to judge someone you don't even know, and being so stupid to stand beside someone who made sexual assault art as some form of revenge because of cookie run kingdom discourse. Try to say somehow can't point out the stupidity of Rose trying to call me out for "racism" when the content she likes is even worse than kawaii-chan by leaps and bounds because "oh well those are infamous examples," like that's supposed to matter. And trying to say Japanese WWII uniforms aren't Nazi uniforms because there Japanese. truly you are a different breed. Actively pretends she knows stuff about the series the person you don’‘t like but your still actively wrong about it, case and point: no KC is not the only Japanese or Asian person in the show. You don’t know what you’re talking about.
Never mind the one person that had the ghual to play devils advocate in her response to me when they literally called my art disgusting without even seeing it. Again, a sheeple you still are my friend.
Hey inky I just wanna let you know that A: You are a coward for not replying to and Sak, who is an actual sexual assault victim. And B: You're a cunt for trying to speak on behalf of minorities and victims. Fuck you.
I don't care what you said about my critique of your art because I know it's wrong. I'm not even gonna entertain it.
As for the point you made about "it doesn't matter where the redesign came from"
If you want to continue to lie to my face and say Leveros would fit in this cast of characters. Be my guest. Fan characters should at least fit the fucking world they're from. You didn't "redesign" shit, Vic is a my inner demons character, you didn't make a My Inner Demons character, you made a cheap lazy knock off out of spite.
I might add onto this later if more comes up. But I'm done for now.
Part 1 - Introducing all the map participants while Zane sits on his bed looking as if he’s contemplating something zooming in on his face tears swell up in his eyes. He closes his eyes quickly wiping them away but when he opens his eyes, he’s sitting on a bench and is now the highschool version of himself in the middle of his empty dark highschool.
Part 2 - each “shadow knight” comes up one by one singing the song each singing a different verse. Getting closer to Zane, getting into his face, pushing him and overall bullying him. Zane’s eyes swell up with tears again.
Part 3 - he gets up and starts running away down the black and blue distorted hallways until he stops to catch his breath when shadow michi pops up in front of him saying “Someones turning the handle to a faucet in your eyes,” she touches his chest then she drags her finger up his body up to his face* “your pour it out,” she points out his tears “where everyone can see,”
Part 4 - Then the shadow knights show back up, each character singing the next four verses, Then zane closes his eyes, with a swing of his arm he slams it against the lockers, singing the corus, flashbacks of other times Michi (still with the shadow design) seducing and trying to “sweet talk” Zane, and the “Shadow knights” also bullying him.
Part 5 - continuing off from the last part, flashbacks still play. Until the verse “Tears fall to the ground” where we see water drops splash on the ground. “Will just let them drown” it pans up to his face as the tears flow eyes still shut tight. But at the end of the verse his eyes open he’s back to the older version of himself. He looks at his hands and then stares off back into space.
Part 6 - Zane gets up and starts pacing back and forth struggling to hold back more tears as more memories of the shadows sing the verses, he grabs his head slumping down to the floor
Part 7 - the shadows in the flashbacks continue to mock him, the verse “those crybaby tears keep coming back again,” plays while zane struggles to hold back more tears, the tears start to flow again. When the door to his room opens kawaii-chan steps in. the flashbacks stop.
Part 8 - she rushes over and kneels down in front of him. She sings the song until the verse “where everyone can see”. Then zane starts breaking down shaking his head singing the song
Part 9 - he’s still singing the song until the The first “but you don’t fucking care,” then he looks up at her. Pitiful tears still flowing he pulls down his mask showing him smiling, but it's sad and pitiful. While kc looks on in pity and discomfort.
Part 10 - More tear drops fall to the floor kawaii-chan wipes the rest of the tears away while his smile fades, Flustered and angry he turns away.
Part 11 - kawaii-chan puts down her swatted away hand, She looks away and ponders a bit… closing in on her mouth she starts singing the song. As it switches between the older and younger versions of themselves.
Part 12 - it Continues to swap back and forth as Zane looks over with a surprised look on his face, looking back at kawaii-chan tears swell up she continues singing the song and tears roll down on her face on the verse “so your tears are mine,”. Then zane starts singing the next verse.
Part 13 - zane continues singing the song In his highschool form, he wipes her tears away in her highschool form which transitions into her adult form. She touches his hand in contentment still crying.
Part 14 - Kawaii-chan throws herself into Zane’s arms hugging him tightly and sobbing. Only saying the first “cause you don’t fucking care,”. Zane looks at her in shock in confusion unsure of what to do, the shadows of the shadow knights and michi look down at him judging him but during the last verse he hugs her back.
Part 15 - Zane begins to cry again, but now he’s also smiling, genuinely. During each “crybaby,” a memory of Zane’s bullying and michi mentally abusing him flashes, around them hugging, but they fade away. Then during the “will just let them drown” a memory of zane and kc looking happy flashes.
Part 16 - we look at both kc and zane’s tearful faces then it pans out to show the shadows, but as the song ends. The shadows dissolve.
Character refs: (NOTE: Draw in your own style not the chibi style shown, this is just for color)